Spice
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 | | Subject: Spice Fri Jun 07, 2013 9:17 am | |
| Basics - Name - SpiceAge- 3 years
Breed- Gray wolf
Rank- Slayer
Gender-female► ◄ △ ▲ ▶ ▷ ◀ ◁ ▽ ▼Appearance - Spice is a silver lined grey she-wolf with a base coat of white. A variation of shades of grey cover her ears, tail, and paws. One of her ears is darker than the other and the grey color that covers her face resembles a raccoon mask. Her fur is long, thick and great for winter months. She also has hazel-green eyes that change color from deep brown to a translucent lime colouring. She is a very powerful wolf, she is not as fast as other wolves, but she does have stamina that can’t be matched. So she may not run the initial speed but she can go the distance at a good rate. Her agile frame allows Spice to be able to move easily regardless of the type of terrain she is on. She is also able to shift how her weight is distributed, this helps her when she is walking on snow so she doesn't sink into the soft areas. Spice has a great build, she is a larger female weighing near 81 pounds. Despite her hefty frame, she is light on her toes and is 5 3/4 inches. Most would call her big for a female but she accepts her gifts and takes them with pride. Her weight is used also as a advantage when it comes to fighting.► ◄ △ ▲ ▶ ▷ ◀ ◁ ▽ ▼ Personality traits-Spice is overall a very friendly wolf. She is not hostile in difficult situations. Spice loves company and only get mad or defensive when needed. She tries to use calm words and talk things out. She does not like fighting but Is quite good at it. I am a funny wolf at times, trying to bring the best to the conversation or, in some words. I take what comes and try to make the best of my day. I’m also quite over-protective. It’s just a thing that I have. Another trait that she has mostly appears when she is alone or bored. Spice has tendencies to wonder away, which can get her into trouble sometimes
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History - Spice has a interesting life story. It started when she was a pup and lived a carefree life, one night as the frost of winter finally started to appear the smell of smoke woke Spice up. She wasn't alone in her den, she had 4 litter mates who shared the small warm cosy den. Spice wondered outside to see bright red lights so she told everyone and expected them to come enjoy it but it actually started a panic. One wrong step and she was knocked down by one of her own pack mates. As spice awoke later she noticed everybody was gone and the whole camp ground was destroyed, She later spoted a litter mate walking alone. They grew up together basically inseparable, his name was Sky. They hunted, fought of rouges but as time went by Sky wanted more. Sky believed Spice was to close to become even more than best friends, he soon said his goodbyes and promise of meeting again and left one night to find a mate and start a pack of his own. Spice was saddened which opened her eyes and made her look for a pack herself. Later as time went on Spice went to look for her long lost pal Sky. She stumbled on a dead bull elk, and horrified when she found her dead litter mate sky on the ground, obviously killed by the bull elk's horn which was still in his flank. Spice ran off and looked for a new life and a distraction form her horrible past.
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RP-Example - The wolf lunged through the underbrush, catching the hare between its jaws. This was the first kill of the day and Spice was not letting it go. She dug a small hole and buried its lifeless body with dirt. Spice stumbled threw the woods aimlessly. She worried about her kill, and if she would ever find her den, plus the distant howls of other wolves in the area made her more anxious than ever. The thought of loners and packs brought questions in her mind. Yet she still continued her path and hoped to find something to do.. Suddenly she heard small whimpers, that sounded like a small animal. Spice stepped softly to discover a lost pup on the ground it resembled a small puff ball. The pup looked dead but, spice was able to see its small muffled breathing under its plush fur. She stepped quiet and softly as she approached the pup and softly nudged its soft fur to see if it was still alive. she whispered quietly "Oh Please do not be dead".She soon thought *If this pup is ok, its going to need help.*.She worried about the pups mother,but knew it needed help first. Spice drew in air and carefully picked up the small pup as she made sure none o its paws touched the cold winter ground.
She could her small barks from loner wolves not to far from her location, but she pushed on believing it was a rouge and was exploring new space. She soon reached the outskirts of her camp and she placed the small pup gently on the ground and nuzzled against it hoping it would awaken. The wolf Whined at the non-moving body of the pup she started to be anxious and suddenly she heard a noise which made her jump. Her ears turned to the noise but she couldn't figure it out. the she-wolf soon got into a defensive pose as she now vowed to protected the pup. Her mothering instincts kicked in strongly.
Last edited by Orion on Sat Jun 29, 2013 1:59 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : fixing small problems) | |
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Ronan
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Spice
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| | Subject: Re: Spice Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:23 am | |
| - Ronan wrote:
- Before I can accept this there's a few things you'll need to change, don't worry nothing massive
1) Your persona - it seems you've copied the text from your history instead of writing a paragraph on your wolf's personality, whether by accident or not it still needs editing into 50 words min on personality.
and 2) - Spice wrote:
- She is a larger female weighing near 137 pounds.
Please note an average female gray wolf weighs of between 79 – 85 pounds, making your characters weight somewhat unrealistic.
Fixed and edited  n sorry I did not realize my big mistake for persona. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Spice Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:39 am | |
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